The forgotten ... please comment?

this is a re post. this poem is a bit abstract but if anyone can interpret it i would appreciate it. it is my work but i would like to know what people's impressions are when they read it. 10 points to the best analysis. suggestions as to how to improve it will be greatly appreciated. thank you



The forgotten





Cupid



Draw your arrows



And aim at our cold, bitter hearts



Let their golden heads pierce



The thick layer of confusion inside us



Let it dissolve in lonely places



We long to feel compassion



We long to experience love



Anything is better than



The swampy wasteland we inhabit



Gentle warrior



Work stealthily in the cool night



Bring along with you Eirene



Let her whisper the magical words



And change winter to spring



Let peace rain on us



We sit hoping to see bright horizons ahead



Will you forget us too?



We sit in the hollows beneath



The vast emptiness



We sit waiting to be remembered



Must we live in oblivion?



Or will someone hear our cries?



Save us!



Waiting here is longer than perpetuity



Please save us from the nothingness we've become



We desperately wait



For our redemption dayThe forgotten ... please comment?
That is pretty good i think it expresses your longing to be love or feel love though you've see love and hear of it you've yet to experience it personally you've long waited for but have not yet received it you know what it can do ';Work stealthily in the cool night



Bring along with you Eirene



Let her whisper the magical words



And change winter to spring



Let peace rain on us'; but you've never been in loveThe forgotten ... please comment?
the poem it is express how you can love someone with all your heart