How are my song writing Lyrics?

I usually write songs and poems. This one is kinda based off of ';Hey There Delilah';. I want so opinions and constructive criticism. Thanks to everyone!



Titled ';Flowers';



Hey, Lila don't be so sad.

I know that this storm is bad.

And I know you're under the weather,

But Lila I promise I'll make it better

just for you.



I hope that this will change

Spring will come and bring some rain

And Summer will follow through.

So that the Lilacs turn to blue.

I'd do it all just for you.



And when the grass is green

The colors changing faster than you've seen.

The flowers are growing faster into bloom.

They're like the stars and the moon.

It's all for you.





Time is just rushing by

I hope that I'll never have to say bye

To you.

Because you brought my heart from the blue.



And so I'll be free

I'll write a symphony

From Me to You.

So that you can sing with me too.



So that you know that I care for you.

That I always worry about what you do.

That I'm sad when you're blue.

But now you're happy and I'm happy to.



If I Could Make All The Stars At Night

If I Could Make Your Heart So Bright

And If I could put the clouds away

So It didn't have to be a rainy day.

I'd do it all for you.

I'd make the flowers bloom just for you.

Because, I'm in love with you.How are my song writing Lyrics?
this is an AWESOME songg. I really hope you will go far one day. LOVE IT!!!!!!